Uhm...I hope no one flames me, if I advertise my friend's new site because we need more active members~! It has a forum as well.
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A post a day, keeps the inactivity away.

I'm going to offer some criticisms here.

First of all, the background is not very well done. Anyone can obviously tell that it's an image repeated a few times. Also, I greatly prefer a plain, one-color background to some complicated background like the one there.

Music that blares out of your speakers unexpectedly when you enter a website is never good. No, music on a website at all is very rarely ever good. Yes, I like the Temporal Tower song as well, but when it's played randomly on a site, then no. Also, it might be stolen, but I don't know.

There is no original content at all. I went through the entire site and didn't see any page that actually interested me very much. If someone wants to advertise a site, the site should be completed and not still in progress.

And that's pretty much it. Note that I'm not flaming you or your friend, I'm just offering some criticism.

Sorry, you can't post other people's sites. And this is in the wrong forum.

Oh ok, sorry.

A post a day, keeps the inactivity away.

It's alright. Just read the rules next time and you'll be fine. ;]

(01-05-2009 03:02 AM)Gameboo Wrote:  I'm going to offer some criticisms here.

First of all, the background is not very well done. Anyone can obviously tell that it's an image repeated a few times. Also, I greatly prefer a plain, one-color background to some complicated background like the one there.

Music that blares out of your speakers unexpectedly when you enter a website is never good. No, music on a website at all is very rarely ever good. Yes, I like the Temporal Tower song as well, but when it's played randomly on a site, then no. Also, it might be stolen, but I don't know.

There is no original content at all. I went through the entire site and didn't see any page that actually interested me very much. If someone wants to advertise a site, the site should be completed and not still in progress.

And that's pretty much it. Note that I'm not flaming you or your friend, I'm just offering some criticism.

ROAR! It`s still under construction

Uhm...

Yeah, your layout needs to be much cleaner. Bright red, #FF0000, is BAD. At LEAST change it to like, #770000 or something (it will get darker). The background is too bright, too. The banner has the same problem... do us all a favor and ditch the star things, or at least use a gradient with them.

Don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to be mean. I understand if you're not a very experienced webmaster yet. :) But please, you won't get any visitors unless you have an eye-friendly layout and an easily navigable site.

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